Your heart listens in silence,
The secrets of the days and the nights..
But your ears thirst for the sound,
Of your heart's pleas and plights..
Your fingers sense the unknown,
Knowing its a mirage or a delusion..
But your senses touch the brinks,
Feeling some truth or may be some fiction..
Your mind tells the days to come,
Life will remain always evergreen..
But your soul never wishes to believe,
Of that one wonder or that one gleam..
Ah !!!
The Paradox...
By..
Am In Trance
Friday, October 24, 2008
11 Tranced..:
I dont really have words to say how I feel after reading this...perhaps you know how I do.
Why the "ah!" in the end ?
Hats off! :-) seems yer posts come once in a blue moon...but de effects last long :-)
Lovely work,lady! :)
Pal-->>How U Feel ?? :P
n' the "ah" part.. Umm Guess U know abt it..!!
K.o.c.h.u-->> Thanx Dude.. :)
Aayushi-->> Uff You Feminists !!
U think only gals can write poems ahem !!
No lady But 'LAD' Here.. LoL!!
Thanx !!
wonderful! what a depth, great.
शुभाम् करोति कल्याणं,
अरोग्यम धन: सम्पदा,
शत्रु बुद्धि विनाशाय,
दीपमज्योती नमोस्तुते!
Lovely :D
(w) ah!!!
Everything is a farce...I feel that way sometimes. I wish my soul would never wanna believe that though.
Well-written!
Keshi.
and Happy Diwali Trance :)
Keshi.
LOL!..I'm so so so sorry!
You're --> AIT frm now :P
I seriously like this poem,and the pic adds to the effct of it! Good work! :D
hmmm...
Ah!!! :)
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