For the first time in my life,
I saw the new sun;
The Reason, I never slept,
Yes, I was praying all night…
For the second time in my life,
I felt pain in my chest;
The Reason, my heart wept,
Yes, I was crying all night…
I called you an angel,
I saw wings at your side;
The Reason, I was in sky,
Yes, I was flying all night…
You forgot to say good night,
I forgot my sleep;
The Reason, I was missing you,
Yes I was dying all night…
I said, we’ve so much in common,
We would end up being one;
The Reason, I really hoped that to be true,
Yes, I was counting all night…
You said, you’ve no words to praise me,
I lied motionless for an hour;
The Reason, I never felt so good,
Yes, I was grinning all night…
I said, I never lie,
Then I thought of you and me;
The Reason, I was assuring myself,
Yes I was lying all night…
You said, I should’ve told you before,
What difference could that have made;
The Reason, I was not a competitor,
Yes, I was trying all night…
My love is hopeless; it carved its home in me,
And GOD !! I was sweating;
The Reason, the home was in ashes,
Yes, I was burning all night…
My loves die, even before they are born,
And my feet were muddy;
The Reason, I was in a graveyard,
Yes, I was mourning all night…
All Night..
By..
Am In Trance
Sunday, November 2, 2008
22 Tranced..:
***My loves die, even before they are born,
And my feet were muddy;
The Reason, I was in a graveyard,
Yes, I was mourning all night…
These lines add to the ironical effect of this poem!
Trust me..m tranced.
Dude! Fabulous! I mean it!
This is brilliant!
I can relate to this one so very much Trance.
Keshi.
I love this picture ! So much better than the last one..it was ghastly..groteque !
:(
And about the poem , I read it long back...and still love it the same.
Ditto Keshi - Brillant!
You always find the most amazing images to accompany your work.
@ Milady : Cz the pictures are his own creation lady !
Crystal-->> Thanx Dear.. :)
Mac-->> Am so Grateful.. :)
Keshi-->> Glad You Found It Readable.. :)
Pal-->> Yea.. Pictures Tell Who We Are...
And Thanx For Still Lovin' It... :)
MiLady-->> Thats Coincidence.. :)
Thanx.. :)
Pal-->> Nah..!! This Picture is not mine Dear.... Am Not That Much Gifted.. :)
M equally in trance..i dnt need to write nethng further...u knw wt wil i write..rite?
Hats off buddy! Absolutely lovely!
brilliant work.. must say...
thanks for dropping by my blog..blogrolled you...
i am in love with this post.....goodness me....how can u express yurself so so so deep eh.....i suck at it....wow yru amazing
btw wassup eh...long time that i stopped here but shud be here more often now....take care....hugs
gr8 poem..very simple yet emotional and meaningful...
seems as if u hav lost sum one close to u ur luv....
a very gud try.....keep posting
www.arenaoflife.blogspot.com
wonderful dear!
wonderful composition
you have a great depth in your words.
each word is like a pearl in this ocean. keep up the good work my friend.
God Bless you.
hey man
its awsome, wonderfuly written, lovely work.
keep up the good work friend. hey by the way what happened to cidi? shee has stopped posting?
Seasons Greetings to YOU and Yours my friend :D
damn awesome post....!
hows it gng....long time no news
oooh m tranced.. beautiful
This is absolutely amazing.
I have no words to describe how touched i feel after reading this..
Its just like someone penned down what’s going on in my mind.
Really great...
i came back here just to read this poem once again....awesome
My loves die, even before they are born
Aha! I am reminded of a very similar thought I messed up quite a while ago.
Keep it up. :)
I was standing dumbstruck,
Staring at the engraved stone;
Wishing that it wasn't true,
Yes, I was hoping all night..
Great Poem.
:)
No new posts since 2008????
*that INXS song does not count*
Whyyyyyyyyyyyyy?
The lines here are sooooooooo outstanding...
Put on the poetic cap again...
PHUUUUUULEEZZZZZZEEEEEEEE...
"YOU are the best":-)
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