All Night..

For the first time in my life,
I saw the new sun;
The Reason, I never slept,
Yes, I was praying all night…

For the second time in my life,
I felt pain in my chest;
The Reason, my heart wept,
Yes, I was crying all night…

I called you an angel,
I saw wings at your side;
The Reason, I was in sky,
Yes, I was flying all night…

You forgot to say good night,
I forgot my sleep;
The Reason, I was missing you,
Yes I was dying all night…

I said, we’ve so much in common,
We would end up being one;
The Reason, I really hoped that to be true,
Yes, I was counting all night…

You said, you’ve no words to praise me,
I lied motionless for an hour;
The Reason, I never felt so good,
Yes, I was grinning all night…

I said, I never lie,
Then I thought of you and me;
The Reason, I was assuring myself,
Yes I was lying all night…

You said, I should’ve told you before,
What difference could that have made;
The Reason, I was not a competitor,
Yes, I was trying all night…

My love is hopeless; it carved its home in me,
And GOD !! I was sweating;
The Reason, the home was in ashes,
Yes, I was burning all night…

My loves die, even before they are born,
And my feet were muddy;
The Reason, I was in a graveyard,
Yes, I was mourning all night…

22 Tranced..:

CяŷştąŁ November 2, 2008 at 7:12 PM  

***My loves die, even before they are born,
And my feet were muddy;
The Reason, I was in a graveyard,
Yes, I was mourning all night…

These lines add to the ironical effect of this poem!
Trust me..m tranced.

Macadamia The Nut November 3, 2008 at 6:10 AM  

Dude! Fabulous! I mean it!

Keshi November 3, 2008 at 7:36 AM  

This is brilliant!

I can relate to this one so very much Trance.


Cinderella. November 3, 2008 at 1:17 PM  

I love this picture ! So much better than the last was ghastly..groteque !


And about the poem , I read it long back...and still love it the same.

Miladysa November 3, 2008 at 5:47 PM  

Ditto Keshi - Brillant!

You always find the most amazing images to accompany your work.

Cinderella. November 3, 2008 at 10:37 PM  

@ Milady : Cz the pictures are his own creation lady !

Am In Trance November 3, 2008 at 11:12 PM  

Crystal-->> Thanx Dear.. :)

Mac-->> Am so Grateful.. :)

Keshi-->> Glad You Found It Readable.. :)

Pal-->> Yea.. Pictures Tell Who We Are...
And Thanx For Still Lovin' It... :)

MiLady-->> Thats Coincidence.. :)
Thanx.. :)

Pal-->> Nah..!! This Picture is not mine Dear.... Am Not That Much Gifted.. :)

The 'Mad' Orchid November 3, 2008 at 11:27 PM  

M equally in trance..i dnt need to write nethng further...u knw wt wil i write..rite?

k.ø.c.h.ü November 4, 2008 at 7:17 AM  

Hats off buddy! Absolutely lovely!

Swayam November 7, 2008 at 8:14 PM  

brilliant work.. must say...
thanks for dropping by my blog..blogrolled you...

Princess Mia November 22, 2008 at 11:28 AM  

i am in love with this post.....goodness can u express yurself so so so deep eh.....i suck at yru amazing

btw wassup eh...long time that i stopped here but shud be here more often now....take care....hugs

haritha November 26, 2008 at 1:00 AM  

gr8 poem..very simple yet emotional and meaningful...
seems as if u hav lost sum one close to u ur luv....

a very gud try.....keep posting

मनुज मेहता November 26, 2008 at 11:33 AM  

wonderful dear!
wonderful composition
you have a great depth in your words.
each word is like a pearl in this ocean. keep up the good work my friend.
God Bless you.

मनुज मेहता December 18, 2008 at 4:11 PM  

hey man
its awsome, wonderfuly written, lovely work.
keep up the good work friend. hey by the way what happened to cidi? shee has stopped posting?

Miladysa December 24, 2008 at 2:45 AM  

Seasons Greetings to YOU and Yours my friend :D

aqua gurl December 28, 2008 at 1:07 AM  

damn awesome post....!

hows it gng....long time no news

ishqia December 29, 2008 at 1:46 PM  

oooh m tranced.. beautiful

buttercup February 5, 2009 at 3:59 PM  

This is absolutely amazing.
I have no words to describe how touched i feel after reading this..
Its just like someone penned down what’s going on in my mind.
Really great...

Princess Mia February 23, 2009 at 3:42 AM  

i came back here just to read this poem once again....awesome

Soumya July 16, 2009 at 10:56 PM  

My loves die, even before they are born

Aha! I am reminded of a very similar thought I messed up quite a while ago.

Keep it up. :)

Sayak Shome June 3, 2010 at 7:38 PM  

I was standing dumbstruck,
Staring at the engraved stone;
Wishing that it wasn't true,
Yes, I was hoping all night..

Great Poem.

suruchi June 6, 2010 at 11:57 AM  

No new posts since 2008????
*that INXS song does not count*
The lines here are sooooooooo outstanding...

Put on the poetic cap again...
"YOU are the best":-)

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