Who needs to Cry,
Who needs the Pain..
Who needs to Wait,
Sunny days are over n' its only going to Rain....

Crying was the Root,
Crying was the Strain..
Crying lost its Faith,
Now it seems, It was all only for Vain....

Who owns Whom,
Who rules the Sky ??
Who wishes Agony,
To enlight dark spaces, we only give a Try....

You still have your Heart,
You want to bring it out of its Hide..
You want to question It,
Do you think for the neighbour, who just made a Suicide....

End is Inevitable,
End is the Key..
End marks a new Begining,
It holds the whole future, and forces you to See....

Blades Only know to Hurt,
Blades Only enjoy the Pain..
Blades never came on your Freewill,
Never came to cut you again and Again....

Life is a lesson my Heart,
Life tells us somany things New..
Life shows us the People,
People who were among the Few....


33 Tranced..:

Miladysa August 1, 2008 at 9:36 PM  

Powerful words my friend!

ceedy August 1, 2008 at 11:16 PM  


Princess Mia August 2, 2008 at 7:03 PM  

ah this was neat man...

vidya August 3, 2008 at 2:08 PM  

pain expressed in a beautiful way...

Nithin Jayan August 3, 2008 at 9:46 PM  

wow here's ma official hiiiii.........
n u hav been linked...!!!

aqua gurl August 4, 2008 at 11:55 AM  

i'd agree with ceedy

Keshi August 4, 2008 at 12:04 PM  



Am In Trance August 4, 2008 at 2:40 PM  


Actually it was.. Mumbling of the powerless...!!

Am In Trance August 4, 2008 at 2:49 PM  


Really ??
What was the point of Interest Though ??

Am In Trance August 4, 2008 at 2:50 PM  


Thanx Mate..

Am In Trance August 4, 2008 at 2:50 PM  


Pain is never Beautiful Sweety..!!

Am In Trance August 4, 2008 at 2:51 PM  


Thanx for the visit dude...

Am In Trance August 4, 2008 at 2:51 PM  

Aqua Gal..

Really ??

Am In Trance August 4, 2008 at 2:51 PM  



ceedy August 4, 2008 at 6:36 PM  

This from your poetry skipping all the middle words...

WHO - Rain (can have many implied meaings)

Crying - Vain (truth many a times)

Who - Try (again many questions one can ask - and why)

You - Suicide

End - See (can one really see it?)

Life - Few (very feew live a full life)

Am In Trance August 4, 2008 at 7:23 PM  


WHO - Rain (Its not the ppl.. But the Feelins)

Crying - Vain (Truth Yeah.. U Bet..)

Who - Try (Without Tryin' We are Animals..!!)

You - Suicide (Not Me... Am MuchMore Stronger)

End - See (Yes One Can.. Hav U Ever Really Tried ??)

Life - Few (And Very Few Make That Life Worthwhile...)

TakeCare Dude..

ceedy August 4, 2008 at 7:29 PM  

See isnt it interesting already that we are having so many interpretations - so thats well written :)

and about seeing the end...personally I dont worry much about whats gone or coming...simply enjoy each day as it the answer to your question will be no....

Pooja August 6, 2008 at 4:03 PM  

nice work...m luking 4 more 4m u...

Anonymous August 7, 2008 at 4:46 PM  

Hi ,

I was reading ur blog posts and found some of them to be wow.. u write well.. Why don't you popularize it more.. ur posts on ur blog ‘REVIVAL’ took my particular attention as some of them are interesting topics of mine too; the poem is fabulous and thought provoking.....

BTW I help out some ex-IIMA guys who with another batch mate run where you can post links to your most loved blog-posts. Rambhai was the chaiwala at IIMA and it is a site where users can themselves share links to blog posts etc and other can find and vote on them. The best make it to the homepage!

This way you can reach out to rambhai readers some of whom could become your ardent fans.. who knows.. :)


Solitaire August 8, 2008 at 1:15 PM  

Painful words my friend!

Are you still in trance? Check out results of the photo tag on Warm Fuzzies, when you can.

Princess Mia August 14, 2008 at 2:49 AM  

where have u been gayab eh? just dropped in to say hi hellow how r u ;)

Divya August 25, 2008 at 7:41 AM  

true, life teaches us a lot of things. although, i wonder why most of the things it teaches us are painful.
anyway, loved the poem...
blog rolled you!

Princess Mia August 26, 2008 at 1:41 PM  

when u updateing next mate....looking forward for yue next one....jaldi karooooo

Art and Poetry August 26, 2008 at 11:32 PM  

Interesting words and image well done!

*~*{Sameera}*~* August 29, 2008 at 12:21 AM  

That was painful!But very well versed.

Take care.

Princess Mia August 30, 2008 at 4:33 AM  

you have a dedication for ya at
come check it out n make yur dedications. cheers!!

Prashant Sree September 7, 2008 at 3:19 PM  

Hi Revival,

A revitalization of the human life and its mystery.,..

I can just say
"Why so many reactions" ;)

Keep reviving !


Am In Trance September 7, 2008 at 5:24 PM  

Coz' without Reactions... You Are Nothin' But Animal Dude...!!

ceedy September 19, 2008 at 6:00 PM  

where are you?

Cinderella. September 24, 2008 at 10:43 AM  

YOu've been tagged !

Keshi September 29, 2008 at 12:09 PM  

Hope ur keeping well Trance.


Scribblers Inc September 29, 2008 at 2:59 PM  

good stuff...but make a suicide? hmmm...

Scribblers Inc.

Am In Trance September 29, 2008 at 8:18 PM  

-->> Scribbler: "good stuff...but make a suicide? hmmm...

Suicide isn't only when you kill your body dude..!!

Its smthn very Deep...!!!

Anyway its passe'....

Keep Rockin'..

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